Okay so you took the feat Toughness 3 times giving you a +9 to your HP). You will want to add this +9 HP to the you have already. Bit surprised you picked that one feat that can stack for all 3 of your feats but that is your choice.
Your melee and ranged attack should be raised by "2" each. Because as its listed right now you are forgetting to add the base attack bonus to the appropriate stats bonuses
After making the 3 small changes you are approved and ok for game. But, can't post in game till I make your introduction post, and tell you your items list. Please understand I will have that post made with in the next 24 hours, and with hope sooner.
To Krusten:
Thanks! I was and am trying to give depth to the game world for my players and set the emotional tone of the campaign. I really have been needing feedback on how I am doing as a GM, and what players like or don't. What they want to see more of, or rather not see again, and so on.