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Poetry From The Konquerer Of Z

Time that fades and drifts to none

Its essence fades with passing moments and trickles away like running water.
Whence it came from far and distent place to running past all though sprinting race.
The spanse of space thats given time, a second only in someones mind.
Its small and puny and passes quick, while your life passes which each click.
You know one day that your time will come your life and soul will soon succumb.
Your childish dreams of glorious life will fade as flowers on a winters night.
All finally see the midnight draw, the nearest praise exaggerates a flaw.
I am falling in a distant time when no one cares and no one cries.
When ground I hit my blood it spills, then I will die and forget this all.
No heaven, no hell will stop my course, into the ground with my discourse.
Once know the glorious of Gods good grace, never more to show his face.
With knowledge comes an evil foe, you find things out you shouldn't know.
The cause of life fades with the knowing, that god and man together are cunning.
The make of man to make a god in which all things his sink in its bog.
The man will vanish and all thats left is what he made, religions best.
While gods removed from man their grace, a shame upon the human race.
The need for fear, the need for hate, man must determine his ultimate fate.
So heaven he made, put god above, so man could live and learn to love.
What god they served man chose his own, so man would never again die alone.

Z Konquerer The Poetry

It is interesting prose from someone that is an agnostic. I did notice your use of 'God' and 'god' and do not know if it is purposeful, but might shadow your own beliefs. Perhaps your interpretation will clear the way - cliff notes please .

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Since there is no choice for beliefs in between organized religion and agnostic. I believe in God because it is a logical choice. There is no evidence of evolution of cross species, that means something had to start the whole process within each species.

The use of `God` depicts my former beliefs of christianity in which I was an evangelical christian. I have studied the Bible in depth as well as other religions and have formed my belief that the majority of deities have been created by man as expressed in the two sentences,

`The cause of life fades with the knowing, that god and man together are cunning.
The make of man to make a god in which all things his sink in its bog. `

Then I go on to speak of mans religion which traps people into a snare in which everyone is wrong but them leaving the idea by default that literally billions of people are going to hell.

Im not really wanting to debate this issue hear, but I am thoroughly impressed by how much you picked up from reading it with no explanation. You are correct, the use of God and god are specifically meaning full and do in fact reflect my beliefs. Not everyone catches the small things like the capitalization of God. Thanks for reading!

Z Konquerer The Poetry

I am glad that I was not too far from understanding your choice of words, and do not worry, we will not debate anything here as the Poetry Board merely discusses poetry itself and its interpretation.

Z Konquerer The Poetry

Out of the posts that I have read that you have posted, it gives me the impression that your are quite the educated person. Your intellect and persuasion are impressive and leaves an impression every time I read one of your posts. Your poem is well written and well thought out and leaves me to think of my own beliefs and thoughts of the passing times.

Edited: glyphfury on 1st May, 2005 - 2:16am