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He Loves Her

He says he loves her
He fell in love with her blue eyes
Her long blonde hair
Her dazzling smile

He says he loves her
And that's all right with me
I watch them talk together
And I'm so happy

They're walking hand-in-hand
And it's obvious she adores him
I never would have guessed
But I think I understand

He says he loves her
She's his "Daddy's little girl"
And even though they just met
He says he loves her

Her Loves He

Wow, I didn't know you was such a good poet Farseer! What inspired you to write this poem?. I used to write a lot of poems in Spanish, everybody used to love it, I will try to write some english when I feel some inspiration.

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Well, that's very kind of you, I'm not sure it's so well deserved It's from when I introduced my daughter to her father for the first time when she was about a year and a half years old. This was written way back then, and I couldn't actually find the one I wrote, so this is not exactly the original -- I was just winging it as I remembered it.

He went "head over heels" and she obviously adored him from that very first meeting. Interesting how "blood will tell."


I'd love to read some of your work!
Roz

Her Loves He

That's great Farseer, and there's no way ever that it could not be "so well deserved"! I just wish I had had that kind of thing with my dad .
Though with this part;
"They're walking hand-in-hand
And it's obvious she adores him
I never would have guessed
But I think I understand"
I personally think it would fit better as something like;
He says he loves her
And it's obvious she adores him
I never would have guessed
But I think I understand
or something, since then it'd still be 4 stanzas, 4 lines each, and a "He says he loves her" on each. Anyways, just a thought, good poem!

Her Loves He

Micalan said:

You and me both, kiddo.

You are probably right about the continuity issue in that third stanza. I sure wish I could find my original scribble -- I still feel as if there is something missing.

Roz