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This is actually a song that I wrote, if that's ok, and it's the first song I ever wrote

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Your tears fall down on my soul
I feel like I'm losing control
Every minute we're apart
I find a piece missing from my heart
There's only one thing that I have to say
and although I don't have my own way
There is only one thing left to do
and that is to say I love you.

Chorus
Because me without you is like a sky without stars, empty.
Because me without you is like a forest without trees, empty.
Because me without you is like a mind without thought, empty.
Because me without you is like a heart without love, empty.

All other words that I say
Live for only that one day.
But the only way those three words will die
is when I leave the comfort of your side
but the day that happens will never arrive
because being with you is when I'm most alive
As your love flows through my veins
I feel like I'm going insane

(Chorus)

The Money in my life is meaningless
The fame corrupts my judgment
but your love clears my mind
because you put my thoughts at ease.
with a gaze that reflects your soul.
a soul which is a piece of my own
and if you should die tomorrow
I would never let your love go
(Repeat Chorus x2)

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Reading this song makes me curious as to what tune you have associated with it. Do you have a midi file of your music? Have you recorded it anywhere?

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Unfortunately, I haven't recorded any music for it yet I kind of have a soft rock tune in my head for it as soon as I get it recorded I'll post it.

Message Edited! Persephone: It is not necessary to quote the entire post of the user above you.