Story looks good so far.
Need to know if we can get the Wildcard on the comms.
How bad is Maiokus hurt, is he dead, or just severely injured?
Krakrefr and Silver are ready to engage the enemy from the opposite direction now.
I think we should hold onto the comm freq book for negotiation purposes.
I imagine you can, I am pretty sure Njall gave you guys a transceiver.So you should be able to call us up and let us know that the frequencies are clear.
.
Yeah, they've got one of the encrypted transceivers, so we're in contact on a secure line. Whoever is 'running' Enerii is on the comms, and could call out for help - Njall would certainly relay an alert that the jamming is ended. If the channel is clear hopefully GTC HQ will already through to our troops.
Another layout query - is the med-bay in one of the Low-Berth suites, or is it a converted stateroom (Perhaps the stewards state up on the passenger deck, or one of the crew states on bridge deck). So I know where Doc Shuth is.
.
The Med Bay is a converted stateroom located on the passenger deck. Also, I appreciate the use of "I say again" vs. "I repeat" in your character's radio transmission; when I was a radio operator with the ARNG that was one of my pet peeves; that and the use of "Over and out" .