Looks good to start on my end, but that's not my call
Note: you do have the option of selecting up to 2 flaws in exchange for feats. Flaws can make things more interesting, and more feats are always good.
The main concern I have right now is posting rate. You seem to wait days at a time in between posting on here. Will that continue to be the norm as a player?
Edited: daishain on 19th Dec, 2017 - 10:10pm
I changed the name, didn't realize it was defaulting. I see Fatebringer and I think… "Me."
As far as my posting rate, it was partly because of my frustration at not getting the character sheet to take the first few times and not wanting to type it all out again and partially because I knew that once I do get approved I would be posting more so I was giving myself a small breather before following up with the time commitment to a game like this.