My First Poem

My Poem - Sciences, Education, Art, Writing, UFO - Posted: 18th Aug, 2008 - 4:13pm

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Post Date: 18th Aug, 2008 - 5:27am / Post ID: #

My First Poem
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My First Poem

The sun shimmered in the heat waves

As he stares out over the aching desolation

Like a bronze image in the sand

Seemingly untouched by the murderous sun.

Evidences of scarcely healed wounds

Covers his clean cut limbs.

The suns glare blind's him,

As dizziness and nausea rise in his brain.

He strives on regardless.

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18th Aug, 2008 - 11:53am / Post ID: #

Poem My

For a first poem that is not bad at all. Are you reflecting on yourself?



18th Aug, 2008 - 4:13pm / Post ID: #

My First Poem UFO & Writing Art Education Sciences

A nice poem indeed writing is not my strength so keep going it will only get better.




 
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