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Well... I ocassionally write poems... and I was thinking about sharing some...


Objeto luminoso y cortante;
Inmanente a un ser
Miserable y paranoico.

Alivias las penas
o matas al alma?.
Espectro insincero
Amante seductor
Importa si mientes?


Abre el umbral de la muerte,
ven mata las penas
con un beso desgarrador.

~Edith. (May, 2000)


..oops, sorry it is in spanish!!

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..oops, sorry it is in spanish!!

Maybe you can translate it for those of us who do not speak the Terrestrail language?


Or if all your poems are in Spanish then I will move it to the Language Forum. Thanks.

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Not all my poems are in spanish, maybe i should just share then ones written in the "Celestial" language? LoL+1 (sure alright!!)

Here it goes:


Here I send you this
with this little poem too
I wrote many more
But this is the one for you.

A selfish guy like you
Do not deserve for me to cry
And be through all this pain
So you can finally break my heart.

And so I'm sending you this stuff
Stuff that reminds me of the two of us
Of the greatest time of my life
Of the darkest secrets of my mind.

True love is fair and kind
Gives, not just takes
Compromises from the heart
Gets involved, forgives and cares.

And I thought that I found it with you
Until I sadly realized
you usually looked at yourself
Everytimes you looked at my eyes.

And there's one thing you should know
I never meant to hurt your heart
I know that I did things wrong
Of which I deeply apologize.

But every morning when I wake up
I want to feel happy and smile
If neccessary I'll erase you
From my mind and from my heart.

And every morning when I wake up
I want to believe this was a dream
That i never got to meet you
Or even know that you exist.

A guy like you might think
That knows what this poem is all about.

Now I plead for forgiveness
To the one I haven't met
To the ones that really love me
For all the mistakes that I made.

Now every morning when i wake up
I thank God and smile
For all the learning and progress
and for making me open my eyes.

So Die now at last
Die and never come back
Die all memories of you
Die your sweetness and pretty eyes

Bury the deepest feelings
Any remind of love
I repet to myself
Die now at last
While i get everything done.

A guy like you might think
That knows what this poem is all about...

~Edith

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Nice poem, it sounds strangely familiar to events in your life surrounding the dating thread. Or am I mixing this up with something else?

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Not all my poems are in spanish, maybe i should just share then ones written in the "Celestial" language?

Well what you can do is keep the Celestial ones here and post the Terrestial ones in the Language forum

*hehe* Wait til LDS sees this thread!

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wowww thanks for sharing those poems with us! I used to write LOTS of them when I was in high-school. I used to have a folder of them and my friends at school used to borrow it to read them and even they used it for some love-letters!
Hmmm this make me think if I should start writing again, what do you all think?

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If you can write start right away!!!

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I usually write about things that happen in my life... which is not very often.

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Hmmm this make me think if I should start writing again, what do you all think?

Wait, you have started yet?