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Forever My Love

Forever My Love

Thinking about you all day and all night,
Thinking about you and whats wrong and right.
All kinds of thoughts running through my mind,
The thought of your touch sends chills down my spine.
People say its just a crush, but I think its more.
I swear that I love you and you're the only one I adore.
I want to be close to your body, and feel your sweet embrace.
I want to be so close that you can feel my heart race.
The butterflies in my stomach have got to be the best part.
I want to lose all control; I'm just not sure when to start.
I want you to love me, so dear and so true.
I want you to love me the way that I love you.
I am giving you my heart, so don't let me down.
Treat me like a queen, and let your love be my crown.
Give me all of you, and I will give you all of me.
And our love will be perfect, the whole world will see.

this was also written for Kevin...most of my poems are....give feedback and tell me what you think

Love Forever

Nice poem Xtrasweetgirl, I hope Kevin likes it too and he can deserve it also.

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Again WOW!!!! xtrasweetgirl you continue to amaze me!!!!! You really are an amazing writer keep those close is all I have to say...

Love Forever

Very good, I like it. You work your words like an artist works a pencil to create a masterpiece. Love poems are always much fun to write.

Of course, I only did one...

Two if you count my other one that didn't really make sense...


Sorry, I'm babbling.

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