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In Your Bed

My retreat, my refuge
My escape from the fears and worries outside.
It is here you can always find me
Even if only in dreams.

My tears in your pillow
And memories of better days
When innocence was still a stranger
When heartbreak was hidden in shadow.

It is here you can always find me
Even if only in dreams
Where I laid myself before you once
Giving my soul away and never looking back.

Echoes of promises broken
Residues of hasty words never meant
Stale scent of old perfume
And the spice of blood from a broken heart.

Where I laid myself before you once
Giving my soul away and never looking back.
I still don't regret the conquering of my heart
And I meant when I said I would love you forever.

The sun thaws the ice outside as well as my heart
As I lie here with you and get lost in your eyes.
Know that your touch still means the world to me.
Heartbreak never felt so sweet as it did coming from you

Bed In

Very good poem, one that makes you ponder... maybe you should compile a book of these?

UPDATE: After further thought I think the message here is better for adult minds unless you give more in depth explanation for its' innocence.

In Your Bed UFO & Writing Art Education Sciences

Thanks! eh, if you keep flattering my poetry so much, I might become a bit conceited.

Well i guess its a lil too hot for the spot.. remember i am not a teen anymore.. :<!--emo&:)--><!--endemo-->

Edited: xtrasweetgirl on 16th Mar, 2004 - 12:13pm

Bed In

Yes, I do remember, that is why it is moved to the Adult Poetry board

Bed In

*applaudes* You *should* complie a book, it'd be excellent if all of the other poems are as good as that one. Very wonderful

In Your Bed

I found the poem a very good read, but it has been some time since you posted it, I wondered wether you have made any new poems... if you do, consider placing another here for me and others to read.

In Bed

I really liked the emotion behind this and it seemed to flow really well in my opinion