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Taking Flight

Now this was written several years ago..when i was in my teens. It was written at a time when i met my "first love".



Second choice of one who's heart belonged to another
Wind, snow, hail
Shroud the embers of her heart.
She becomes cold, hard.

Inflicting pain brings her joy.
Heart to stone, tears to pearl
She can love no more.

Hark- Cupid's arrow
Her eyes fall on an angel
Dark hair, colour of gold
Eyes which see the light she can no longer behold
Words which speak only of love.

He speaks
She falters

He touches her

Stone is turned to flesh
Blood through veins
Tears from glands
Wings, halo

Two angels taking flight
Free to love.

Flight Taking

Good job Cookie, the first love can really have an emotional effect, so do you still have love like this in your life?

Taking Flight UFO & Writing Art Education Sciences

AmAZING!!! This poem is truely wonderful.

Great stucture
Great Lexis and Syntax
Great Meaning and nostalgic feelings

Great work!!!

Flight Taking

well thank you both very much

and no...i dont have love like this in my life anymore...*sigh*..

unfortunately sometimes good things must come to an end

but im glad both of you liked it